Title: This is correct because there is no abbreviation. Abstract: The main findings were focused.

Introduction: The novelty was clear but the background was not adjacent. This part needs to be expanded.

Methodology: From beginning to end, the method was clear, however; the optimum conditions needed to be emphasized.

Results and discussions: This is well disciplined based on the materials characterization. The mechanism needs to be focused based on the reader’s understanding.

Conclusions: This is adjacent with the abstract points.