Content of review 1, reviewed on November 10, 2023
The article is very interesting and relevant. This paper reports on the importance of sleep for better well-being. I have some minor changes that the authors should revise. There are also some parts/procedures in the text that need clarification. Please see below all the points and attached the authors may find the pdf with the comments if find it more useful.
- A reference is missing (line 39 after "... calendar age")
- Section Procedures (line 75) is missing when was the study performed. Please provide the month and year of data collection. This applies also to study 2.
- In the statistical procedures sections, the level of significance used in the tests is not provided.
- Please clarify. Which experimental sessions? What was the experiment? (line 119 is not clear)
- Here should also be clarified.
Participants were assigned for morning or afternoon sessions according to reported chronotype? (line 124-125) - From lines 128-130 no need to mention the procedure for blood sample collection since these samples are not going to be presented in this report
- In all your graphs where is related to calendar age. The authors have an error "calender age" Please correct this error in all graphs
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