Content of review 1, reviewed on June 15, 2023

This is a relevant and well written essay and I only have some minor comments, mostly suggestions to make the text more streamlined and clearer. Please see them in the marked pdf.

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Content of review 2, reviewed on August 04, 2023

Thank you for the thorough review, I am happy with the implemented changes.

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