Content of review 1, reviewed on December 17, 2014

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After the period, add: This is a typical example of an unintended consequence of renewable energy (citation). Citation should be to:

Andersen O (2013) Unintended Consequences of Renewable Energy. Problems to be Solved. Springer London, London.

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In addition to ref 3-6 include citation to:

Andersen O (2013) Consequential Life Cycle Environmental Impact Assessment. In: Unintended Consequences of Renewable Energy. Problems to be Solved. Springer London, London, pp 35–45.

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Replace "Danish" with "Denmark"

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Comment on this quite narrow system. Reflect upon what is missing out.

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Use a different denotation, e.g. A, B, C ( "columns 2-4" is not indicated in the table)

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Replace "last" with "right hand (D)"

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Replace "Below in Table 2 is a" with "In Table 2 is shown a"

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Explain "green tonnes"

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Replace "below Tables 3" with "Table 3"

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Remove "Below"

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Replace "was covered" with "was in 2009 covered"

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It appears strange that Upper Peninsula (U.P)is not included in this map that one would expect show the whole state of Michigan. Include U.P, or explain why U.P is excluded.

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    © 2014 the Reviewer (CC BY 4.0).

References

    Fengli, Z., M., J. D., Jinjiang, W. 2015. Life-Cycle Energy and GHG Emissions of Forest Biomass Harvest and Transport for Biofuel Production in Michigan. Energies, 8(4).