-Title: "Predictors of Mortality in Staphylococcus aureus Bacteremia" Comment : Title is suitable with the content of research but the aim is not clear in it .

-Abstract Section: *Summary: Staphylococcus aureus bacteremia (SAB) is an important infection with an incidence rate ranging from 20 to 50 cases/100,000 population per year. Between 10% and 30% of these patients will die from SAB. Comment: It is important note about this percantage and requeres to explain the reasones . Comment:The abstract should be separated into background, aims and conclusion. Comment:It has no aims.

-Introduction Section : Section: The incidence of SAB increases with advancing age, with the lowest rates observed in pediatric populations, at approximately8.4/100,000 population per year. Comment:It is depending on many factors like health rate , age group, immune response

Mortality Section:The purpose of this review is to examine factors that influ-ence mortality and investigate the relative impact of each factor onoutcomes for patients with SAB. Comment:The Misuse and Overuse of antibiotics play an important role with increase the complications and then the mortality rate.

Age Section: the increased mortal-ity from SAB associated with aging is directly linked to changeswithin the host as a consequence of the aging process, and ageremains a significant confounder when examining other variablesthat influence outcomes . Comment:It is also associated with the decrease in the immune state of patients .

Age section (host factors): is the most consistent and strongest predictor of all-cause and infection-related 30-day mortality, with the majority of SAB cohort studies using multivariate analysis, confirming age as an independent predictor of mortality. Comment :The age group of children very susceptible to any type of bacteremia.

Gender Section: The incidence of SAB is generally higher for males than for females. Comment: Clarification the reasones.

-Table 1 Summary of studies that have examined the impact of age on mortality in cases of Staphylococcus aureus bacteremia Comment: Table 1 have more information that must be arrangement.

--Fig 1 :Impact of age on overall 30-day mortality from Staphylococcus aureus bacteremia. Percentages of patients who succumbed at 30 days following an episode of Staphylococcus aureus bacteremia are stratified by 10-year age groups. (Adapted from reference 155 with permission of Elsevier. Comment : Fig 1 not clear and has no more title for columns.

Socioeconomic status (SES): is known to impact a patient's infection risk Comment: Socioeconomic status was not important in this research.

Immune Status :Immunosuppression can be defined as a congenital or acquiredquantitative or qualitative deficiency of phagocytic cells, comple-ment, or humoral or cell-mediated immunity.
Comment:Explain which type of immunity( innate or humoral) more effective for this study.

Bacteruria : S. aureus is an uncommon uropathogen in the absence of bladdercatheterization, instrumentation, or surgery and thus typicallyrepresents hematogenous spread. Comment: Explain the mechanisms of this bacteria on UTI.

Table 3 :Summary of studies that have examined the impact of severity of illness on mortality in Staphylococcus aureus bacteremia Comment : Table 3 has a short name within the table. it was not cleared.

conclusions: Comment: This paper has no conclusions.

References: Comment: Introduction has more references compare with other sections of the research . Comment: Modren references should be distributed on each section of the research.