Content of review 1, reviewed on June 01, 2021
Comments on abstract, title, references
ABSTRACT: Though, I have read a lot about the subject and have good information about it, but I have not done any research about that. It matches with the main article. * The aim is clear and the methodology is outlined. * Result and conclusion: They are aligned with each other. TITLE: * It contains the key features. * It is an important subject, but not interesting. * It is accurate representation. REFERENCES: * The references are relevant. * The refrences are current. * If they are cited at the very end of paper is better.
Comments on introduction/background
It does not contain several refrences and is a rapid 3-weeks research that is not a strong background. It is somehow relevant to the WHO guidelines. The study population is not big but their data is complete.
Comments on methodology
- The process of subject selection is clear.
- Variable measurments are not clear. They have used external data. 3.The method is not relaiable because 2 authors did not reach to the same result and had to have a third author.
- There is not enough detail.
Comments on data and results
The tables and figures are presented appropriately.They are relevant and clearaly presented.
● Appropriate units, rounding, and number of decimals? yes ● Titles, columns, and rows labelled correctly and clearly? yes ● Categories grouped appropriately? yes ● Does the text in the results add to the data or is it repetitive? yes ● Are you clear about what is a statistically significant result? yes ● Are you clear about what is a practically meaningful result? yes
Comments on discussion and conclusions
● Are the results discussed from multiple angles and placed into context without being overinterpreted? No, after discussion there was a third author needed because of disagrrement between the two others.
● Do the conclusions answer the aims of the study? yes
● Are the conclusions supported by references or results? no ● Are the limitations of the study fatal or are they opportunities to inform future research? they are not fatal
Source
© 2021 the Reviewer.
References
Valerie, S., Declan, D., Alistair, N., David, R. 2020. Care bundles for improving outcomes in patients with COVID-19 or related conditions in intensive care - a rapid scoping review. Cochrane Database of Systematic Reviews.