1. Page1 - Line27: The abstract states that sixty studies were included in the review. However, in Fig. 1 the studies reviewed were sixteen. Was the sixteen misspelled as sixty?
2. The sequence of the explanatory answers stated in the abstract (Page 1 - Line 27-38) does not match the sequence of the questions stated in the aims (Page 4 - Line 46-54 to Page 5 - Line 4) section. Please rearrange the sequence accordingly to match each other.
3. Page 6 - Line 17-28: Be consistent. When less than 10, the number should be written in number and subsequently in words.
4. Page 8 - Line 33-56 to Page 9 - Line 3-8: Indicate the number of each type of action research used among the sixteen articles that were reviewed.

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