Abstract, title, and references Section : This study provides a clear aim while using a title that is suitable with the journal contain and supported with enough reference.

Introduction section : The body of the publication has a clear introduction, research question, and process of subject selection.

Methods Section: The variables defined and measured are appropriate, also the Study provides detail in order to replicate.

Results Section: No repetitive text is found in the result section and it is practically meaningful. The results discussed from multiple angles and placed into context and without being over-interpreted,

Discussion and conclusion Section: The results discussed from multiple angles and placed into context and without being over-interpreted, it is ended with conclusions that answer the aims of the study and may lead to future research.

Summary of review :

In my point of view, overall of this commentary article is good and suitable for publication because the authors conducted a scoping review to answer the aforementioned aims which is the intervention that may empower the mother to practice Early initiation of breastfeeding (EIBF). The list of database source that was being used also diverse, it adds to even more complex result and discussion that has been proposed.

However, there are correction and some improvements that could be made on this following topics: we found 11 references that is older than 2010; it might be best for the authors to consider putting the newer reference for this scoping review journal