Content of review 1, reviewed on June 20, 2021
The methodology is adequate, but while writing the results flow is not adequate. One section ends and then the second heading starts abruptly. There is a need to make the results section coherent. Similar headings should be in one place and there should be a flow of arguments while moving from one section to another. Second, the paper is written in a descriptive manner. The analytical part is weak. The studies which have been included in the paper need to be analyzed critically. There should be a build-up of arguments and then analytical discussion around them which should lead to a legitimate conclusion. The conclusion section needs to be re-written.
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Content of review 2, reviewed on March 12, 2022
The author has addressed the previous comments of all the reviewers. Thanks
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References
Jeffery, A., Grace, W., Y., Z. I., Padmapriya, S., Eleanor, H., Stephen, N. 2022. Asian Drinking Cultures in New Zealand: A Scoping Review. SAGE Open.
