The aim of the study in this paper so clear . The tittle informative and little long in words , but still relevant .The references not so modern and also appropriate key studies includied.

The background for the topic paper already clear , The research paper in introduction step need more clearty in questions .

The process of subject selection not so clear and need more explanations.The variables defined in the methodology

The data presented in this research paper are more realistic . Also, the table and figures are relevant and clearly . The statistic for the results are clearly

The results are discussed and proven in multiple angles as well as the conclusios give answer to the aim of the study .The conclusion didnt supported by references and the limitations of the study not fatal.