A biased language such as "Our findings, We study" should not be used. It should be impersonel in the writing of the article. The method of this study is lacking. The sampling method is uncertain. This study was not written in accordance with scientific article writing norms.

My suggestion is that you read published papers on similar topics to know what is expected of good research papers and then refocus your own topic, use the appropriate methodology, provide some innovative results and use impeccable English. Unless all these very serious problems are sorted out, it will be difficult for your work to be considered by any major journal.