• The topic is very interesting and relevant. However, certain revisions need to be done for the paper to improve. • The abstract need to revise. • The introduction is quite short and does not provide enough justifications for the study.
• The author needs to follow standards in academic writing; several ungrammatical constructions were evident in the paper • Themes in literature review must be written in a more specific manner, for example, moves: purpose,discussion and results so on. the study needs recommendations