The paper title is informative and relative to the handled task. The paper aim was well stated (An in-depth review of Dromedary (Camelus dromedarius) and Bactrian camel (Camelus bactrianus) crossbreeding husbandry practices in Turkey and Kazakhstan) in the content. The abstract is in agreement with the (Pastoralism: Research, Policy and Practice journal), author guideline. The word counts are 97 words.

As for the reference within the narrative as well as in the reference list, the Author did follow the style of (Pastoralism: Research, Policy and Practice journal), author guideline. References were in proper style. The majority of the paper references are recent and appropriate for such study.

In the introduction section; the author reviewed the most recent and appropriate publications relevant to the paper topic. The author reviewed the historical as well as the recent crossbreeding practices of dromedary vs Bactrian camels. Such an approach justified the question of the article in a good way.

The author followed the descriptive methodology in his review, which is a valid and reliable method of Research. It is clear enough to be duplicated in any place of the world taking into account the place specificity. The results in this paper were successfully presented by the author since he used clear and well design as well as informative tables and figures indicated his findings. Each and every figure has a clarifying identical text.

The conclusion was well made and has no duplication of the results. Main points of finding were focused on the conclusion.

The Overall strengths of the article are indicated in focusing on major ideas/topics and given enough attention; and explanation to the aim of the study. It is expected that this article in addition to scientifically documenting the Dromedary and Bactrian camel historically and recently crossbreeding husbandry practice in Turkey and Kazakhstan), it will help in developing the camel husbandry sector in Turkey and Kazakhstan, as well as in Other countries where people do practice camel rearing.

I do believe that the article is well written and deserve to be published in a globally well known and recognized Journal.