Overall , this is a good paper which requires some editing. The abstract summary is succint, and covers all the salient points.The introduction covers the overall area well and the methods section is nicely detailed, The results are well presented and discussed with useful and effective figures.The conclusion is short but adequate.. The text needs some editing with the following suggested changes:
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