Content of review 1, reviewed on March 28, 2021
Comments on abstract, title, references
title : the title is informative and relevant aims : the aims is not clearly stated. findings : the abstract did not state specific findings, the methods clearly stated. references: relevant, recent, correctly referred, and key reference already included
Comments on introduction/background
the research question is not clearly outlined. the writer only write the issues around the topic
Comments on methodology
the subject selection process is pretty clear. However, the parameters within each variable were not defined properly. Therefore, it will be difficult to reproduce this research
Comments on data and results
data presented in appropriate way and the results are presented clear enough
Comments on discussion and conclusions
the discussion is well written, the conclusions are on point and answering the paper aims, the conclusions supported by references, there is no information regarding future research opportunity
overall statement
Tourism filed is often overlooked by the concept of sustainability of supply chain management. This article found that the SSCM application in the field of tourism is important but challenging.
Overall strengths of the article and what impact it might have in your field
This article catches an important issues in sustainable supply chain management as tourism is one of the most profitable sector in the world. More research in terms of SSCM application on tourism field are expected in the future and this article could help our tourism sector more profitable and sustainable.
Specific comments on weaknesses of the article and what could be done to improve it
- please revise the abstract according to the comments in the above section
- please revise the introductions by clearly stating your paper objectives
Source
© 2021 the Reviewer.
References
Font, X., Tapper, R., Schwartz, K., Kornilaki, M. 2008. Sustainable supply chain management in tourism. Business Strategy and the Environment, 17: 260.
