Content of review 1, reviewed on January 11, 2021

  1. title : the title don't explain clearly about the scope of nurses. because there was any differences nurses characteristic
  2. abstract : quite clearly, but it is better than the researchers add the data in quantitative. it is important to know the magnitude of the content of research
  3. references : you should be using the update journal that have relations with your article
  4. introduction : the background don't describe why you write this article. the problem do not explain clearly
  5. method : good enough, but you could describe the variable that you will measure
  6. result : several cut off point in the box should be changed. because any sum of the professional do not include in the cut off point
  7. discussion : you should make discussion with a purpose as guideline. your discussion do not specific and explain about the purpose of research. choose the dominant variable in your research to describe clearly with update theory
  8. conclusion : the conclusion do not answer the research question. according to the objective in the article to analyze between occupational health services with the SESMT. it should be describe in the conclusion both of them. SESMT and occupational health nurses

Source

    © 2021 the Reviewer.

References

    Ines, T. R. D., Regina, C. M., Alves, B. C., Liana, L., Fontella, S. C., Martins, d. C. A. 2016. Occupational health nurses: interdisciplinary experience in occupational health. Revista Brasileira de Enfermagem.