This is an interesting manuscript that provides some nuanced and interesting insights into individual privacy concerns and their relations to knowledge. Although the results in the end did not seem to support the hypothesis regarding the connection between knowledge and concerns- I still think that these are the novel findings (or non-findings) that the manuscript should emphasize. Please see above for comments regarding the manuscript

Thank you for considering my comments in this version of the manuscript. I appreciate the work that was done on this revision and recommend the publication of the manuscript in its current form. Good luck!